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Ada Limón
Thursday Shout Out (Okay, It's Monday)
The first time I heard Abraham Smith read I was shot back in time. I pictured me, a scraggly beat-girl, hearing Burroughs and thinking Whitman while rocking back and forth to a new sort of preacher’s sermon. Smith has a rolling rhythm come from deep in the backwoods of Ladysmith, Wisconsin that rocks a bit like a boat on the rough Mississippi heading for the West Village circa 1963. All this to say it felt, at the same time, familiar and utterly alien. In his new book, Whim Man Mammon just out by Action Books, Smith pounds out a rhythm with a boot heel and sits you down to listen to the man behind the pulpit. Although the title might suggest a book heavily steeped in the language school, Smith shakes off any sort of categorization by blending his singular narrative deep into song that harkens back to Woody Guthrie and those storytellers intrinsically interested in the mythmaking of American culture. In his poem (the poems are listed by first line only), “HER AND I HAD BEEN IN THE VINEGAR,� Smith takes the reader on a journey of a man maddened by betrayal trying to find some sort of solace in the wreckage of worldly goods that seemingly do us no good when our mental states unwind and unravel. HER AND I HAD BEEN IN THE VINEGAR I am blaming 1981 that night I came home soften another man’s none of it even half way I needed a smacking kiss needed a not shot skunk needed a coat made of stickers I did not know point of fact what knead dew antique not unkind chair since the preacher it was a straight back antique chair balling up in call it crying lonesome okay I picked up my chair and best way to say it is have you seen jimmy stewart’s george bailey filmed that flick had a hard time hard time with also a beetle a demented kid I took of the chair and threw it against chuffing angry ground ivy poison ivy donning stiff old cold pants in the morning is chilblains raw itch filth monstrous I fell in a ravine little death legs there was tart clay there were the atomic the chair at my hip kept slinging it the million heisted the day I heaved the chair part ways through georgia that’s the way what to do the chair was fine because it was
what you are they look at you like okay that’s the landless scythe because I was I shotput the chair I lobbed it and it held part like it was making love to the tree and part like it was a lot sad I was a pity racy sight it was I couldn’t reach I waited for a deal of time under that sweet gum tree the chair wanted to come back to me I took off my cap I made a sweet talk the chair was proud and pissed part like it was telling the tree psst to sit down and part like it was just that infernal tree sticking didn’t come rain came boot hard old news heart char I was creaking bucket my hank boots slipped pig pig sparrow
From the very first lines we are struck by the exposed voice of the speaker, an honesty that is both confession and a seeking of validation. With a stark rhythm at first, simple and unadorned, Smith welcomes us in and guides us to the pews. The voice that says, “Let me tell you something, just a simple something.� Once we’re set in and comfortable, the language begins to brave a bolder discourse. With sound-play that amps up the risk and deepens the grinding hootenanny of imagery, Smith builds a powerful monologue of man and nature, heart and hard times. Feral language fills the rural terrain of the mind with lines such as, “chuffing angry ground ivy poison ivy/ all earth a chill flame� and “that’s the landless scythe,� as we become accustomed to this new human dialect. Pitting man against the natural world and man against himself, the poem is essentially an ode to what humans cannot grasp, the way we cannot tame the untamable earth (we amongst that unwieldy lot). The speaker hurls a chair into a tree, as if he might be able to fling himself back to his natural birth, start again. Then, he wants the chair back, but it won’t come (like the woman’s love unreturned), what’s done is done. Until at last, rain is what comes. No answer, no conclusion, only wet boots, a moving on, a clumsy flight. Throughout the book songbirds, woods, dear good folk, working the land, heartbreak, and blossoming are mile markers as we travel the cultural landscape of Smith’s music. With his ability to unfold an extended metaphor with uncompromised skill and beauty as well as his gathering faith in the human spirit, Smith has created a book to cling to when a true good word is hard to come by. As Smith says in CAROL, REMEMBER WHEN, “We groped to find the song/that could change everything, sharpen our point,/end war, at least kill a guy with a feather/and a noun, kill him into a better guy.� Here is that song. Comments |
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